Friday, December 12, 2008

MDD cosplay part 2

Ta da! I finished flonne. Underneath the shirt is:
cosplay part 7.1
I have no idea why I made it so nice when it's gonna be covered up anyways. But it was fun. Decided to show it here. XP
Reference:
reference flonne 02

Finished product:
cosplay part 7.2
Reference:
reference flonne 01
The colours are a bit off in this pic. Her shirt's not supposed to be pink.... nor are her shoes supposed to be green. But it's good for checking the design of the shirt.
reference flonne 03
Ya, I know I always have a whole lot of references. But it helps me see what I'm doing and if there's anything that I missed.
What you think about Flonne? (She was really fun to make, only exception was the sleeves which I had to slowly erase the background surrounding it. >-<)
The hairstyle was made using 3 different hairstyles. One for the fringe, one for the dangling hair on her shoulders and one for the long hair behind. XP Colouring the corset (what I call it) is really fun. It's too shiny now. XP
The ribbon(headpiece) is from the christmas decorations. XD
I noticed that the hairstyles in MDD are usually slanting to the left. o-0 I had to laterally invert the hair to change it to the right. XD
Alright! Flonne is done!! What shall I do next? I have some ideas but still need to check whether it's possible... and it's a secret! Bye for now!

Thursday, December 11, 2008

MDD cosplay

I finished Etna!! The hand-drew stuff are the ring on the collar, and the devil tail. What ya think? Good? (I personally think the ring which I hand-drew is pretty bad) So, enough of me talking and let's show the picture:
cosplay part 8 (This is after editing the hair and the ears. After finishing Flonne, I was bored and hence did this. And don't zoom in on the eyes cause it looks terrible like that)

How is it?
Yes, I coloured the eyes red!! Gwa haha!! Oh... the skirt looks pretty crap. But still okay, I hope. The shirt took ages to get the design right. It's not all hand-drawn though. It was originally a swinsuit. XD I went through hell to find the bracelets. Other than those, the other portions was fine. I enjoyed colouring the eyes though. It was fun. All I can say now is "magic wand is my favourite tool!! "
The reference pics are here:
reference 01
reference 02

I'll probably do Flonne some other time... I'm tired and Flonne is gonna be a whole lot of trouble to do. Bye then!

Saturday, November 1, 2008

Happy Birthday to me~

Happy birthday to myself!! (Sounds stupid doing this) YAY!!! MY BIRTHDAY IS HERE!! I'm finally 15 years old!! Congrats to myself!! (Lame.)
Looking forward to the card that I receive every year cause that's always funny comments in my card, written by my family members. I sure hope that the card is cute. (I'm obsessed over cuteness.)
Then, that's the matter of gift. I can't choose anything too expensive...so I'm not sure what to buy. Another soft toy? (But we got a lot of them already...) (I want a PSP, but I doubt they will buy it for me, so forget it. *sigh*) Or maybe I could be the nice, considerate person who doesn't buy a gift on her birthday.
Looking forward to the cake!! I seldom eat cake so it's a treat for me! (I don't like to eat too much cake, but occasionally it's fine) I hope that it's ice cream cake again this year....*drool* (Yes, I love ice-cream, got any problem with that?)
My tastes are pretty childish after all. Not just my taste, actually. XD Even my face is child-like. I'm always being mistaken younger than my age. (The worst instance would be when I was 11 years old and someone asked my mother if I was 7 years old. o-0 What the ........) Even now, I'm 15 but people think I'm either 13 or 14. >-<
Looking forward to the dinner!! I always love going there. (And the dessert there rocks! Now I sound like a person obessed with ice-cream, don't I? XP) But my brother isn't feeling very well....I'll wait and see. If he can't eat the food now, I'll postpone it. Cause I love eating the food there and it's sad if my brother can't share it with me. T-T Out of my whole family of five (including myself), I love my brother the most. (My most beloved brother~)
It sounds like I have been talking a lot about how good it is, but actually it's no different from a normal day when we are not celebrating. I have to do my homework (as always!) and the Saturday work chores. (Like washing my shoes. ) But it's still good. XP
Have you ever wondered about the birthday wishes? Like why only one? I want three wishes or more. (Greedy fellow!!) First would be for my exams to get good results, second for my happiness, (Enough of being selfish) lastly for the people involved in my life to achieve happiness. That includes my family, my classmates, my ex-classmates, my teachers who have realllly helped me, my friends, my neighbours, and my net pals. (You guys.) (Should I also mention that I have a neighbour on another storey who also have the same birthday as me?) I shall end this now, wishing that your days will be filled with happiness.

Added on: My brother says that we can go to the restaurant. YAY! And oh, I shall try to upload at least one chapter today. (Notice the word try) For the next few days, I will be very busy indeed, so I can't work on the stories. (WAH!) Tomorrow got my cousin wedding, then the day after that I got tution, and the next day also got tution, then my chinese exam. That's only 4 days to my exam. T-T But after that, I will be more free and more happy. (But have to start on holiday homework then. Curse them!!) Good bye then.

Wednesday, October 29, 2008

The KH story Chapter 3

I don't really like the fact that it has no name. Oh well. Since everyone is working hard, I shall try to put some more effort in this work. Let's see.... I don't really have a super edge-cutting image of what's gonna happen next, but hopefully good enough for you two to understand and enjoy. Here it goes...ha! Being lame---> In the previous episode, Roxas was attacked by two men (Not that sort of attack! XD ) and after his escape, he fell asleep in a forest. What will happen to our hero now? Will he ever find Sora?

Chapter 3

The sunlight shone through the gaps of the forest, illuminating part of Roxas's face. His peaceful sleeping face was disturbed when the shrieks of the birds woke him up. He half opened his eyes, expecting to see the familiar surroundings of his home, but instead saw a huge shady forest, with trees stretching around the area in all directions.

For a moment, he was stunned.

"Where am I?" he thought drowsily, as he rubbed his eyes slowly, trying to adjust to the bright sunlight streaming through the gaps in the forest canopy.

Then he remembered.

He also realised that he still had a splintering headache, coupled with dizziness. He felt really hot, as though he was on fire. He was about to return to the sea to splash some water on his burning body when he heard noises. Footsteps, with a lot of shouting.

He panicked a little and hid stealthily among the trees and grass. What he saw really left him speechless. A whole group of men was walking through the forest, apparently looking for a missing somebody. But who were they looking for?

He decided that the people were too close for his comfort, so he begun moving away slowly and stealthily, hoping that these people will not find him here. After all, he might have been trespassing on their land. And only grim futures lay ahead of those caught trespassing on forbidden lands.

Unfortunately for him, he happened to step onto a branch that broke, alerting the men and causing them to turn their heads towards the source of the noise.

"Damn," he thought to himself, as the men begun to inch their way through the vegetation to his hiding spot. It was now or never. He made a running dash away from them and felt a small sense of satisfaction as the men shouted in shock over what had happened.

And soon, the chase was on between Roxas and the group of men. As he turned back to look, he saw that his opponents were gaining on him, whereas he was breathing heavily. His body felt like it weighted a tonne, hindering his progress as he gasped for air.

"Why have I been getting chased since I got here?" Roxas observed. However, he had no time to dwell on that since he was more worried about the way his body was behaving. He felt weak, with his legs like jelly, causing him great difficulty to stand, and even more to run.

"I'm not in tip top condition today..." he thought as he ran into the city district, where it was a never ending maze of corridors and passages. He ran into one of them, reaching a dead end at the end of the road. He was, however not taunted by this and instead jumped onto the trash bin, climbing over the wall and making a perfect land.

However, this action drained him of whatever little strength that he had, and judging from the people's 'energetic' screams, he knew that this chase could last no longer. He rested and panted heavily for a few moments, drawing his weapon when he saw that the men were scaling over the wall.

His weapon was a unique one indeed. At the weapon shop, Roxas had looked around and was fascinated with a chain like weapon with a blade at the end. However, looking at the price made him change his mind immediately. He had watched in growing alarm as he viewed each of the weapon's prices, and instead taken interest in the storekeeper's to be thrown items. He had settled on a metal ring, and a broken handle from that pile, which the shopkeeper gladly gave to him. He then bought the metal wire required for his purpose. By combining all the items, he had a long manipulative string of razor-sharp wire with a strong, metallic ring dangling at the end of it. Hence, his weapon was able to attack multiple enemies, with the right control and timing.

His hands shook uncontrollably as he gripped the handle tight, prepared to attack any one that came towards him. He twisted the wire with a swing of his arm, allowing the metal wire to cut the men, drawing blood as he drew back his weapon. A few others lunged straight at him, only to be attacked straight in the chest as the metal ring smashed against them.

His fight did not last long though. He was drained of all energy, barely able to stand. The world starting spinning around, the colours blending into a mesh as his view distorted. He saw a figure, (one of those men?) about to cut him with a knife, when another person grabbed the figure's wrist, causing him to drop the knife.

Who was the fellow who had interrupted his fight? Who was the person who saved him? He only saw a flash of red as he fell to the floor, collapsing into a heap......

Seriously, what the hell is wrong this week? Did I offend someone? A god? A god of what? A rubbish dump?... First, when I was walking and minding my own business when suddenly these two kids fell from the sky. What the hell? Kids don't fall from the sky!! They were like unconscious and drenched in the rain, if I left them there I would feel guilty. I'm not a softie, it's just that they resemble some cute little abandoned kitty, okay?

Anyways, one of them was short, cute, with brown hair that was flattened due to the rain, while the other was taller, had silver hair. What can I say? So I took them home and put them by the fireplace, where it's pretty warm. Then almost immediately they woke up and started freaking out! I mean, haven't they seen such a nice house such as this before?

Then it turns out that they panicked cause they were walking and fell into a pothole. (They're pretty dangerous, you don't really see anything there but there's little holes in the ground which is hard to get out of. You should try falling in one) Okay, I sympathize with that. What then? They fell into this place which they don't know. The houses here don't look like it's from the poor district or the rich district. This place is the 13th districts, boys. It's not accessible by the public. How you got in? Why do you ask me? I guess that there's a magically weak area in the barrier that keeps the people out. In simplified terms, there's a barrier that prevents people from entering the 13th district. You guys by sheer coincidence managed to fall in the weakest spot at the correct moment so you got in.

The barrier is weak cause it's over a hundred years, you know!! The strength of spells sort of wears out over the years! It's natural! NO, you are NOT some kind of bad luck attractor!! Boy, stop crying and listen to me! And you, stop glaring at me. I'm just a kind-hearted stranger.

Sigh. Should have left them in the rain. What bothersome children. So, after the question and inquiry session, I find them some clothes for them to change into, leave them to sleep on the sofa by the fire, and I call the Organization. Report about two weird kids in my house. Requesting for permission for them to stay as temporary guests until this issue can be settled. So, I have to bring them to the court tomorrow? Yes, I got that. What?! Get them some decent clothes? You have to be kidding me!! Okay, okay, I got it, you don't have to scream. But the organisation better pay for it.

So, I take the kids out for a trip to the tailor the next morning, and there's this weird kid that jumped over the wall. A stunt actor? The people here like to do that sometimes. Then the shortie claims that that's his brother as several people clamber the wall after him. Fine, I'll go help him, boy. Just STOP SCREAMING IN MY EAR!

So it seems that the boy is also a outsider, and these minions want to eliminate him. Not surprising, since it's stated in the law that Trespassers must be eliminated. But hey! This is a special case, dudes!

Anyways, I went to stop the one attacking the boy, and the boy faints. What?! I was pretty shocked actually. Yep, I could see that the boy was in bad condition, his skin was pale, lips were dry, but still, woah! That scared me!

The people chasing him are just people from the smaller groups. That makes things a lot easier. As a proud member of the Organisation, I can just claim that the boy is in my care, and ta-da! Problem solved! They wouldn't dare to question the words of a member of the Organisation anyways. Sure, it's abusing my authority, but come on, who cares about that? It's also a way to solve the problem.

So, after I chase them off, I went back to the boy lying on the floor. I tried to wake him, but he wouldn't budge! Then, I accidentally touched his arm and it was burning hot! The little guy has a really high fever! I carried him to the tailor's shop for some emergency treatment. After all, I know the tailor well, and she wouldn't refuse someone in dire condition.

Yup, that's it. Now we just have to wait for the little guy to wake up. (and for the others to get some proper clothes) They're wearing my clothes that I grew out of, which....doesn't fit them too well.

Now, what is it? Riku, was it? What the!??! The name is not red hair stranger, the name's Axel! Got it memorised?

END OF CHAPTER 3

Author's notes: It was really fun writing this, especially the axel part. The "got it memorised" is really the game's axel. In the game, he seems to like this sentence a lot... I didn't play the game, but I saw some stuff on deviant art that shows his fondness for this sentence. It's reallly fuun!!! Riku got a bad attitude towards Axel. He's suspicious. A good thing too since Sora is too trusting of strangers. But not for Axel. He's having a bad day. Roxas: Nothing goes right for him these days... T-T Poor thing. I suppose its pretty amusing. I was sort of snickering when I wrote this. (Good children should not practise this. People will think you're scary and insane.) It's a long chapter, right? Actually, I didn't really intend for axel to go talk about the whole thing, but once I started, I couldn't stop. (I just had to write on how he saw two kids falling from the sky! o-0) Don't worry, if axel's ranting isn't good enough, next week we have Sora's viewpoint and maybe some of Riku's viewpoint? I'll relate the whole situation again. For now, adios! Sayonna!

Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Nothing much for me to comment about...

Yay! Finally my characters have some action instead of lying unconscious! Well, I had to spell check the whole text so that my passage would make sense. Spelling mistakes are the worst. I'm glad that English teachers would not be able to check this page out or it will be full of red circles/crosses. Grammar mistakes, wrong usage of vocabulary......

I'm feeling a lot better than yesterday. And my brain juices seem to be working. Wonderful! Oh yeah, for my stories, I tend to try to keep to the original idea as much as possible, so Riku will be using a sword in the story. And a lot of other stuff. (Boo hoo. The idea of guns was nice.) The roleplay should be quite different from my story though. Since everyone has cool weapons, cool costumes, etc. In my story, they would probably be wearing a plain T-shirt since I don't have any idea what they would wear. >-<

What should I say? Doing this is fun. I sort of accidentally-on-purpose developed both stories. The KH story I thought of a cutscene that would be fun for me to type. The children of the ruins story I finally thought of the guy's past. ^-^ Seriously, my creactive cells seem to be in good condition today! Maybe I should continue with more chapters... and then maybe not. Oh well. Have fun!!

The KH story (Chapter 2)

Hmm... where did I stop? Oh yeah, Roxas fainting. Need to get him out of that situation soon... Oh the first part(in italics) is a cutscene from the past. Read to find out more!! (If I don't have a author's comment at the bottom it's probably not completed yet. Oh, how I love to type.)

Chapter 2

Roxas stared down at the two people on the ground. He recognised them, but didn't have any feelings towards them. Sora was kneeling on the road, close to the people, a woman and a man. He wept tears that dripped down from his face onto the bodies.

"Why? Why did they have to die?" Sora whimpered as he wiped his shameful tears with his arm. "Who is going to take care of us now?"

Roxas could not say a thing. After all, what could he say? That their parents were gambling addicts and owned the loan sharks a huge sum of money? That the reason why they were always poor was due to their parents' gambling?

He still couldn't say a thing after all. From the time when he found out, to even now, he couldn't say it. Let Sora have a better last impression of them, he decided. Even if the last impression was a mangled dead body on the ground, horribly slit open with organs missing. The loan sharks had gotten back their money after all.

He put one hand on his brother's shoulder comfortingly, consoling him with his gentle touch.

"There's no one to take care of us now, Sora. We'll have to take care of ourselves."

"I...I can't! Why...Why did this happen.....why...." Sora cradled his head in his arms, murmuring to himself.

"Don't worry about it. I'll take care of you. I promise."



I broke the promise. Sorry, Sora. I couldn't take care of you.



He was breathing. His heartbeat was faint.

"I'm alive", he thought.

He felt the continuous shower of water hitting his skin. He was lying in a puddle of fluid. He was wet.

"But it wasn't raining a while ago..."

His thoughts were detached, as though it was foreign and new to him.

He could heard some conversation taking place. It was blurred and confusing as their meaningless words swirled around his head. He struggled to listen in the world of darkness. It took all of his concentration just to do that.

"....permission.......outsider........how could it be possible..."

As he desperately tried to make sense of what he heard, the other guy spoke up.

"......whatever................outsiders........eliminated."

Roxas's eyes twitched and gradually opened. His eyes could see a sea of rain, two figures near him. One of them started making his way towards him. In shock, he realized that in the man's hand was a knife. A sharp one, by the looks of it.

His instincts took control of his lethargic body as he started a run, then a sprint for his life. The two men let out a yelp of surprise as the boy slipped away from him.

But they were not easily beaten. They started a chase for the boy, screaming and swearing. Roxas barely had gotten a bit of distance before he heard their threats behind him, and he bolted faster than before.

By then, his body was fully functioning, with his blood pumping as he utilised his speed to the maximum. The cool wind blew in his face, with the rain splashing onto his forehead as he ran at full speed towards nowhere in particular. His thoughts were a jumbled mess as he ran, recognising none of the surroundings around him as he tried to lose the men off his trail.

Roxas ran through the streets, turning corners as he tried to shake them off his trail. He continued until he broke free of the city, and followed a road towards the sea. Too late did he realise it was a dead end. A perilous cliff lay ahead of him, with no other way of escape. He heard the familar thud of footsteps approaching behind him.... and he leaped.

"Oh man, we lost him. "

"We'll report this to the boss."

Roxas swum stealthily underwater. Only until he was sure that the men had gone then he dared to come up for a breath. The calming sea swirled and churned around him as he dazed at the setting sun. He saw a shore some distance away and decided to head towards there. He started making his way in the vermilion shade of the waters to his destination.

Upon reaching the shore, he dragged his weary body into the forest, where he lay against a tree and promptly fell asleep.

Author's notes: Long chapter!! Sorry for the lack of Sora and Riku. I didn't expect this chapter to get so long. This chapter features Roxas, Roxas and more Roxas! If you don't understand any part of this passage you can ask me. You can try to make sense of the story and deduce stuff, no problem. But don't ask questions like "Who were those two guys?" or "Why was Roxas being attacked?" cause it would be a spoiler. I intend to explain it in the later parts of the story. So, this is chapter 2! I shall claim that the next chapter will have Sora's and Riku's appearance. Enjoy! (Roxas doesn't fight back cause his body is too weak and his mind is like can't make sense of anything at all. Had to explain this in case anyone thought that Roxas was out of character.)

Monday, October 27, 2008

The children of the ruins part 2

Hey come on... I can't just let the poor guy lie there half dead right? I'm a little tired of the KH story at the moment. So... let's do this. Hah. I would probably stop at half a chapter first though. Yes, decided on girl's name.

The children of the ruins (part 2)

"Arghh......" The boy groaned as he fought to open his eyelids. At first, the images were blurred, but soon after that his eyes begun to adjust to the place.

"Where am I?" The boy wondered as he glanced around. He saw a room of some sort, a makeshift shelter of wood, concrete and others to form a round, place that sheltered people from the sun. He could see an opening at the top part of the makeshift room, leaving the sunlight streaming through it. He tried to get up, but failed to do so. In his attempt to do so, he heard a voice.

"You awake already? Don't get up, you'll hurt yourself. "

The voice was cold and yet gentle. He turned and looked, to see a skinny figure dropping in from the hole in the ceiling. She was sort of lightly tanned, and was a child of about 14 years old. She had black, ebony hair that was cropped short like a boy's. The most stunning feature was her eye, which was deep sea blue, with a touch of sapphire. Her other eye was hidden away by a black eye patch. What she wore was a loose white singlet barely covering her stomach with a pair of light brownish shorts.

"Who are you? Where am I?" He questioned the girl, his voice husky from thirst. The girl stared at him in disdain as she started answering his questions one by one...

"I am a person living in the ruins. I happened to pick you up on my way hunting. This is my house. You have been lying here for two weeks already."

He struggled to move, but the arm in his shoulder caused him to give up his futile attempt.

"Don't even try. " The girl severely warned him. ("Too late" he thought) "The pain is going to stay there for some time. You would just have to get used to it. I need a name to refer to you as. What's your name?"

"My name? I'm not sure. Who am I?"

The girl just stared with disbelieving eyes. It was bad enough that she had an injured guy in the house, but a memory-wiped-cleaned, injured guy was......

"Perhaps it's better that you forgot." The girl said softly, as if to herself. Her eye was sort of hazy, as though she was staring into the horizon. Eyes that show none of the child's youth, but rather, wisdom and acknowledgment. "You need a name. What shall I call you? You can start anew here. "

The boy pondered a few moments, before claiming : "You can call me Kyle then. What's your name?"

The girl hesitated, before a hint of a smile begun to appear on her face.

"My name is Sabine. Nice to meet you."


End


Author's comments: The start of an unusual friendship! What will happen next? Yes, the poor boy has memory loss. Don't worry, he'll remember in time. In case you don't understand, the guy has a missing arm. The girl is has a missing eye. Most of the children who lives in the ruins are like this. After all, they got injured in battle, then thrown out by the army and country for them to die. (The army doesn't have enough medical supplies for all the injured. So when human manpower are easy to get, they don't waste money on 'unnecessary' stuff) I'm sort of happy right now cause I finished another chapter and my homework only left a little to finish for the day. Yay! Any questions?

Author's notes (all)

Heck, why is it that at this point all my characters are like knocked out (K.O) or something?? Unconscious. >-< Really, really what the heck. Am I a sadist or something? o-0 Oh, children of the ruins start off sad, but gets a little better. I got the boy's name but the girl's name... I'm still thinking. Something cool would be nice. And I can't decide to do which story next. The KH story or the children of the ruins or spam all the start of my ideas first. (Not a good idea, cause you will notice the similar trend of the bad starting....my 'better' backgrounds all have bad starting. 'Children of the ruins' is probably the worst start though.. I must have been pretty emo when I thought of it. Actually I wanted a society ruled by children, cause it's cool. ) I think I shall rest for the day. Or maybe start another chapter.

The KH story (chapter 1)

Okay, I am tired from doing homework. Let's take a break. (Have a kit kat, have a break o-0)

Chapter 1

It was a normal day as usual. Roxas lay lazily on his desk, absent-minded as he fiddled with his tie. He watched his twin Sora chatting happily with his group of friends. They were rich but they didn't look down on people. And he wondered, not for the first time, about Sora's ability to make friends with people.

He sighed. When would the bell ring? He had to get to his job soon. And not to mention he had to talk to Riku. Sora's friends were sort of mischievous, and might get Sora into trouble. He had to tell Riku to look after him.

3...-2...-1.... Roxas felt a twinge of anxiety as he saw Sora getting up and walking away with his friends. He immediately grabbed his brother's shoulder and asked: " Where are you going? "

His brother responded carelessly. " Huh...I'm going out with my friends. "

Roxas didn't take it. After all, it didn't help that Sora was twiddling his thumbs as he said it, a habit that he often made while lying. Or the fact that Sora had lied to him not for the first time.

"Sorry, but you're not going out. Stay here and wait for Riku to pick you up, okay? I have to go now."

Roxas sprinted out of the door and to his job, where his money was waiting.

After his job, he went home, only to find an empty house.

"What...must have went to Riku's house."

However, the pair was not there either. Roxas slapped his head in annoynance as he groaned. Sora might have dragged Riku into doing what he wanted. He did have a knack for doing that. If that was so, he would probably have gone to the 6th district with his friends, just for the fun of it. Spoiled little brats.

He headed towards that direction as a frown creased his forehead. Things were not going well for the blonde.

"Woah, baby, come play with us." The people jestered as Roxas tried to break out of the guy's grip. These gays were not what he needed right now. He whipped out his weapon, knocking out a few guys as he continued his run, searching for Sora. He had never been this irritated before in his life. "Sora is gonna pay for this" he muttered to himself as he continued his search.

After some time, there was still no results, even though he had searched the whole district for him, and even several other areas for his missing twin. In desperation, he thought " Sora, if you appear, I would buy you the meat that you wanted to eat. SORAAAA!!!"

The world was spinning around him as he ran. It didn't matter where he ran to. His footsteps echoed in his heart, his head a roaring tide as he collapsed on the ground....

Author's notes: Yay! Chp 1 finished. Chp 2 got more info and axel's appearance. YAY! And we find out where Sora has gone. Tired already....

The children of the ruins

I think I shall call this the title. What ya think? It's a background for one of the video games I wish to make. It's meant to be a strategy game... It's a bit futuristic, with no plot at all. Only got some basic direction where it goes. And a little bit of characters. Not fully developed though. Here it goes:

It's year 2134. (Not like anyone cares anymore.) War is rampant as the nations divide into sections, fighting a continuous battle. The land between the sections are barren, from grenades and bombing. There is no vegetation. There is only ruins of what used to be cities, towns. They call this big vast area of patch land "The plains". However, everyone refers to it as the "ruins". It's a tough age and the children are being dragged to fight, to battle in wars. (But what for?) When people are injured, they leave them on the battlefield to die. Or worse still, they throw you into the ruins. There, most people die without the aid of medical support. Those who survive are left to fend for themselves.

A boy lay on the plains, baking in the hot sun. The sun's glare reflected off his pale, bleached blonde hair as the boy lay unconscious. A shadow loomed over him.

"Oh. Yet another one. Is he dead?"

The girl checked his body for signs of life, slightly surprised that he's still alive. She didn't expect to see a alive person after all. Too many times has she seen a dead fellow, their hands hauntingly reaching towards an imaginary source of hope.

She noticed the trail of blood that dragged on the ground. Also, she realized that the fellow had fainted due to loss of blood. This all could be seen from his bleeding shoulder, with the arm missing.

"Yet another victim, huh?"

The girl spoke in her usual cold tone, developed from her life in the ruins. She was about to leave when she seemed to remembered something. Perhaps, a memory from her past? She shook her head, as though to shake the memory off. Then, she looked at the guy, filthy from dirt. She picked him up gently, and slung his other intact arm around her shoulder, and half carried, half dragged him to her 'house'.

End of part 1. There's a part 2 soon. After I write the KH story.

The KH story (author's comments)

I think I read too much Akuroku fanfic when I thought about this idea. >-<>-< I suggest you wait one or two weeks to read my story first before suggesting ideas in my blank spaces (I will write blank space there...) Or your ideas wouldn't fit in my story at all. I got one scene that I like a lot, only that I wouldn't reveal the secret. I love torturing my poor characters. Especially Roxas. Then there's a side story not related to the real story at all meant to be comic relief. (Or typing relief for me.) It's gonna be random so be prepared! I'm not a romantic person at all (T-T) so I wouldn't be putting in any yaoi or passionate scenes (Okay, maybe one little kissing scene at the end of the story to reward people for reading my lame story. The begining is probably great and the middle gets bad and the ending is bleh.) Wellll, if you hope to read more let's hope that I have less homework. Homework is a pain in the *ss. And exams hurt my brain. I will type this kind of comments pretty often. It's fun to type. XP

Now that I finished a portion of my homework, I shall rest for a few moments. Ha. I shall refer to it as the KH story for now, cause it's catchy and I don't have a title for it. I hate making titles for stories. Or making names for characters. If you all want you can suggest ideas of any kind, I could make a story based on that. (More often than not, I end up making up one entire story from one scene. Usually the middle scenes. Then I think about the character's personality, plotline, etc. Usually these will not have fantastic plotlines, but will be pretty smooth. Those which I start thinking about plotlines first will instead have good background, not much character info and no development on plotlines. >-< WHy like this?? This story is pretty much the only one that goes pretty smooth with decent background. Yes, I love to think about details.

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This blog skin is too boring. Can someone help me find a WORKING blogskin? Preferably black background with some other colour.

Sunday, October 26, 2008

Story 1 (prologue)

This story is in urgent need of a name. And preferably better if I changed the names of the characters. This is in sequence of events, until where I got stuck. Be warned: This is meant to be a boy love story. Features: Roxas x Axel and slight Sora x Riku. XP (Or at least I hope to be) This will be a long story, so sit back, relax and enjoy the show. Please wait for some time before this gets completed. I'm only human after all. Plus, I have homework to do. Especially today (27/10/08) so I plan to complete the prologue today only. If I continue it would be after my homework is done. Comments would be fabulous, cause I love comments.

Prologue: Welcome to my world. ( Random title)

This is a world of chaos and destruction. People are only categorized into two levels: Either you're filthy rich or dead poor. This place has 12 districts. The districts are ranked by numbers.

The 1st district: Mainly mansions, where the insanely rich live.

The 2nd district is where all the good schools are. If you can't get into one, you have no future. Being forever trapped in the cycle of poverty, if you get what I mean. Sora, Riku and I go to school here. (The school fees are tough but I can manage it.)

The 3rd district: where all the petty crimes take place. Specifically, pickpocketing. You can't go into that area without finding that your wallet have been stolen.

The 4th district is where all the gang fights take place. There's always many deaths there and hence the number 4. In Chinese superstition, they believe the number 4 to be unlucky as it sounds similar to death in Chinese.

The 5th district is the most relatively 'normal' district you can find. There are supermarkets, shops, etc. Many people do their shopping here. (If not here then where?) This is also where I work, at the supermarket being a cashier, at the shop being a salesperson, at the tea shops being a waiter, etc. The pay here is decent. The only thing usual about this place is that you can't find any place that's not vandalised. There's always graffiti on the walls, the houses and sometimes even the floor. That's because this is what this district specialises in.

The 6th district is a most unpleasant place, that's cause there's always lots of s*x going on there. People just do it everywhere. I have heard that the bushes are always occupied. Not to mention the prostitutes, etc. I say that there's probably tons of gay bars there and gay brothels there too. That's why I always tell Sora not to go there.

The 7th district is the poorest district, that's where we live. Nobody really goes there much.

The 8th district is where the kidnaps take place. I don't really have to elaborate more on that right?

The 9th district is where all the robberies take place. (Hence, you would never see any shops opening in there.)

The 10th district is the 'pleasure' district. There's lots of entertainment there. People drink beer, go karaoke, gambling, smoking. There's always lots of drunks on the streets and people go broke due to the casinos.

Then, conviently, the 11th district is full of loan sharks and illegal activities like organ trading. It's just next to the 10th district, which is famous for its casino and drunks. A coincidence, or not?

Then, there is the 12th district. There's always lots of drug dealing and junkies in there. There's also piracy going on there. Nothing to be said.

There is no 13th district. Or that's what I thought. And that's where I met him.

Yes, my name is Roxas, and my twin brother is Sora. We look a bit identical apart from the fact that our eye and hair colour are different. Apart from that, Sora is always wearing a smile, while most people would say I look expressionless. I only smile when I need to. Like at my job. It's too tiring to smile always. My face muscles ache after a few hours of smiling. Dunno how Sora does it.

Then there's Riku, who lives next door with his mom. Sora and Riku have been best friends since childhood. I can always rely on Riku to take care of Sora while I'm not around. He's a year older than us, and taller too. Sora says his silver hair and eyes are charming. I don't really think so.

So, this is our story of what happened.

~End of prologue~



Author's note:


What do you think? Interesting? This prologue is from Roxas's viewpoint. Wait for more chapters to come soon. (Hint: Roxas is slightly jealous of Riku.) Anything to explain or add on/ improve yet? I need a title for this story but can't think of any. I'll try to elaborate the plot a bit too. (I got a slight idea about how the plot goes and nothing more.) So far you understand the story? It's sort of like the intro of the story. I suck at explaining stuff, but I think this is fine so far.

The district and crime relativeness was thought of a long time ago, only that I can't remember the exact crime with district, so I made it up as I went along. The 6th district was already stuck in my mind though. Did you enjoy it? I hope you do! Now to do some homework...

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