Sunday, October 26, 2008

Story 1 (prologue)

This story is in urgent need of a name. And preferably better if I changed the names of the characters. This is in sequence of events, until where I got stuck. Be warned: This is meant to be a boy love story. Features: Roxas x Axel and slight Sora x Riku. XP (Or at least I hope to be) This will be a long story, so sit back, relax and enjoy the show. Please wait for some time before this gets completed. I'm only human after all. Plus, I have homework to do. Especially today (27/10/08) so I plan to complete the prologue today only. If I continue it would be after my homework is done. Comments would be fabulous, cause I love comments.

Prologue: Welcome to my world. ( Random title)

This is a world of chaos and destruction. People are only categorized into two levels: Either you're filthy rich or dead poor. This place has 12 districts. The districts are ranked by numbers.

The 1st district: Mainly mansions, where the insanely rich live.

The 2nd district is where all the good schools are. If you can't get into one, you have no future. Being forever trapped in the cycle of poverty, if you get what I mean. Sora, Riku and I go to school here. (The school fees are tough but I can manage it.)

The 3rd district: where all the petty crimes take place. Specifically, pickpocketing. You can't go into that area without finding that your wallet have been stolen.

The 4th district is where all the gang fights take place. There's always many deaths there and hence the number 4. In Chinese superstition, they believe the number 4 to be unlucky as it sounds similar to death in Chinese.

The 5th district is the most relatively 'normal' district you can find. There are supermarkets, shops, etc. Many people do their shopping here. (If not here then where?) This is also where I work, at the supermarket being a cashier, at the shop being a salesperson, at the tea shops being a waiter, etc. The pay here is decent. The only thing usual about this place is that you can't find any place that's not vandalised. There's always graffiti on the walls, the houses and sometimes even the floor. That's because this is what this district specialises in.

The 6th district is a most unpleasant place, that's cause there's always lots of s*x going on there. People just do it everywhere. I have heard that the bushes are always occupied. Not to mention the prostitutes, etc. I say that there's probably tons of gay bars there and gay brothels there too. That's why I always tell Sora not to go there.

The 7th district is the poorest district, that's where we live. Nobody really goes there much.

The 8th district is where the kidnaps take place. I don't really have to elaborate more on that right?

The 9th district is where all the robberies take place. (Hence, you would never see any shops opening in there.)

The 10th district is the 'pleasure' district. There's lots of entertainment there. People drink beer, go karaoke, gambling, smoking. There's always lots of drunks on the streets and people go broke due to the casinos.

Then, conviently, the 11th district is full of loan sharks and illegal activities like organ trading. It's just next to the 10th district, which is famous for its casino and drunks. A coincidence, or not?

Then, there is the 12th district. There's always lots of drug dealing and junkies in there. There's also piracy going on there. Nothing to be said.

There is no 13th district. Or that's what I thought. And that's where I met him.

Yes, my name is Roxas, and my twin brother is Sora. We look a bit identical apart from the fact that our eye and hair colour are different. Apart from that, Sora is always wearing a smile, while most people would say I look expressionless. I only smile when I need to. Like at my job. It's too tiring to smile always. My face muscles ache after a few hours of smiling. Dunno how Sora does it.

Then there's Riku, who lives next door with his mom. Sora and Riku have been best friends since childhood. I can always rely on Riku to take care of Sora while I'm not around. He's a year older than us, and taller too. Sora says his silver hair and eyes are charming. I don't really think so.

So, this is our story of what happened.

~End of prologue~



Author's note:


What do you think? Interesting? This prologue is from Roxas's viewpoint. Wait for more chapters to come soon. (Hint: Roxas is slightly jealous of Riku.) Anything to explain or add on/ improve yet? I need a title for this story but can't think of any. I'll try to elaborate the plot a bit too. (I got a slight idea about how the plot goes and nothing more.) So far you understand the story? It's sort of like the intro of the story. I suck at explaining stuff, but I think this is fine so far.

The district and crime relativeness was thought of a long time ago, only that I can't remember the exact crime with district, so I made it up as I went along. The 6th district was already stuck in my mind though. Did you enjoy it? I hope you do! Now to do some homework...

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